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Part III: at the races -2 of 2 by wheres-wigwam Part III: at the races -2 of 2 by wheres-wigwam
had to be submitted in two parts because it's HUGE

... most of the stuff I wanted to say I said in the last submission.

part III/V- at the races (2/2)
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KBKarma Featured By Owner May 8, 2007
Well...

The panels are too small, so you can't read the writing.

The writing is very thin/faint, so you can't read it.

Some of the panels are too large or too zoomed out, considering the amount of action.

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I'm enjoying these comics of yours. Keep 'em coming!
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